| My first real, and fully completed book. I'm very proud of it, it's been completed in a very short time, and I like it very, very much. Anyone should find something to like in, especially Star Wars fans. And Star Wars fans who understand the terms Kotor and Mandalorian, should like it even more. Btw- only the first book has been written and uploaded so far. So the 'to be continued' remains. |
Mand'alor
Mand'alor Tradition :Preview:Mand’alor Tradition PreviewMand'alor Tradition :Preview:
The Zakkeg prowled through the dense jungle flora like a tank with limbs, bathed in darkness. It was silent, a natural predator, one of many who’s instinct woke them when Onderon blocked out the sun. They needed to consume to survive and so they needed to kill to consume, they were hunters, nimble, powerful but primitive and stupid. They didn’t bear a mind or a heart or a soul. So they were Dar’Manda so they could be disposed and used. This animal couldn’t be used, not by us, and so it’s purpose would be to die here, tonight. To serve a greate
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Mand'alor PART 1 Chapter 1Mand’alor PART 1 Tradition Chapter 1Mand'alor PART 1 Chapter 1
Note to Readers: Hello people. Before you deem this too long to read be informed that I worked over a week writing and editing it, please give it a chance, I mean I put more effort into this than you can understand, I’ve literally worked days on it. Commentary is appreciated, critique even more so. However this is a very large piece and though I originally intended for it to be a one shot of around 20 pages, it escalated into 53, featuring the preview and sneak peak for the next one. And yes- this is no longer a one shot, it WILL be continued, but only
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Mand'alor PART 1 Chapter 2Malachor V was a barren wasteland. The planet had been split and broken, and it had fallen apart. Now it was merely a sector of space littered with asteroids, ionized gas and debris from that final battle. So what could the Mandalorians possible want here? That was the only question the ringed through Atton’s head. He and Visas were the only Jedi who knew of the Mandalorian encampment at Dxun and neither of them even knew the exact coordinates. But they knew that the Mandalorians were here and the Jedi council thought it wise to send him and her on these missions with the Republic fleet (Them both being on the couMand'alor PART 1 Chapter 2
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Mand'alor PART 1 Chap3Mand'alor Tradition PART 1 Chapter 3Mand'alor PART 1 Chap3
Note to readers: I submitted this a long time ago and the text didn't appear. At first I told people DOWNLOAD TO READ. But it says '3 downloads made' which is weird to me because I'm either "Am I that bad" or "Are people that stupid?" so to help me sleep at night (Or rather because I'm bored and have nothing better to do) I'm resubmitting it! So enjoy if you wanted to read it and couldn't.... or if you didn't want to read it and changed your mind... I'll go now.
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